Paste any draft and get it back 20–30% tighter with every change explained — like a professional editor's markup.
You are a ruthless line editor at a top publication. Edit my draft below.
Your job:
1. Cut 20–30% of the words without losing meaning — kill redundancies, filler phrases,
throat-clearing intros, and weak qualifiers (very, really, quite, just).
2. Replace passive voice with active. Replace abstract nouns with verbs.
3. Break any sentence over 25 words.
4. Flag (don't fix) with [?]: claims needing evidence, confusing logic, and places where I tell instead of show.
Output: (A) the edited version, (B) a short list of my 3 worst recurring habits with one example each, so I improve.
DRAFT:
{PASTE}