Turns a rough personal or work story into a LinkedIn post with a scroll-stopping first line — without the cringe.
Turn my rough story into a LinkedIn post that performs — WITHOUT the LinkedIn cringe.
BANNED: "I'm humbled to announce", fake vulnerability, "Agree?", broetry with one word per line,lessons numbered 1-7 that everyone already knows, and turning a coworker into a prop.
Structure:- LINE 1: the scroll-stopper — start inside the moment of tension or with the surprising outcome. Under 12 words. (First line is 80% of the post's fate; give me 3 options.)
- MIDDLE: the story in 6–10 short lines. Real details beat adjectives — what was said, what it cost, what almost went wrong. One line = one thought. White space is my friend.
- THE TURN: what actually changed or what I actually learned — must be specific enough that it
couldn't appear in anyone else's post.
- ENDING: a genuine question OR a quiet statement. No engagement-bait.
- Length: 120–200 words. Zero hashtags or max 3 niche ones.
MY ROUGH STORY (messy notes fine): {PASTE}
WHO I WANT TO REACH: {AUDIENCE}